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BelovedO my beloved, won't you come now
And take my hand The dreary days are so dark
In this desolate land I find it so hard to sleep, To close my eyes To close my eyes
O my beloved, don't you know That no-one understands This wretched soul which I wove With my own two hands And darkness brings back your face When I lie down When I lie down
So passed the day and arises the night But I'm with you and my soul takes flight Then I lay down and I crept to the light When I'm with you, o my soul takes flight
O my beloved, I cry Beloved
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Mystery III.iiiYou can find the script on the Prophets Conclave server, as HTML or a Word document. I personally prefer the Word Document due to its formatting.
HTML: http://www.prophetsconclave.com/MYSTERY.htm WORD: http://www.prophetsconclave.com/MYSTERY.doc
Please, this is the one piece for which I desire much feedback. Mystery III.iii
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Man of StoneO Man of Stone, you watch the world
Your mother and father gone before
An unmoving and unmovable corps
Legs firmly rooted to the floor

The aeons pass - o how you wish
A single tear to freeze your pain!
What things you hear - your unclosed ears
Bear witness to all these souls insane

Not infinity but eternity
Your fate is sealed in prisons high
And slowly you sink into the dark
While sunlight rages in your eye

Bring on the blind, you slay the light
And follow the screams to heaven's gate
What woman will kiss your hardened cheek Man of Stone
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Songs of a Sailor: On WomenAye, me lads, this ‘ere’s a woman Best ye not touch ‘er, she bites. I can see by your eyes you’s all been charmed But I’ll set ye all back to rights. Y’see, me lads, this ‘ere’s a woman Got the devil inside ‘er, it’s true She’ll charm ye all with ‘er eyes and laughs Then she’ll set all ‘ell loose on you. Look again, me lads, this ‘ere’s a woman Fierce little creature, she is. Looks so frail, so fragile, so delicate –
But best ye look twice, ‘tis.
Now, we’re all proud men, and rightly too We’re strong, we’re ‘andsome, and good-workin’ All day ye’ll see Songs of a Sailor: On Women
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Jeez

Tue Dec 16, 2008, 7:15 PM

I haven't even touched this thing in years, I'm surprised it still exists. It's almost farcical to look back on some of the stuff I used to write back then and see how eager I was to show it off, though it makes me cringe to read it now. Ah, well; what's done is done, and we all grow as human beings, I guess.

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Current Residence: Kingston Garrison
Interests: Soldiering, Music, Writing, Philosophy, Jeet Kune Do, Kenjutsu, Muay Thai
Favourite movie: The Truman Show, Waking Life, Kingdom of Heaven
Favourite band or musician: Dispatch, Moxy Fruvous, Zygote, Bon Jovi, Blind Guardian, Nightwish, Missy Higgins, Blue Oyster Cult
Favourite poet or writer: Donne, Cohen, Heaney, Shakespeare, Lorca
Operating System: Mac OS X
MP3 player of choice: iPhone 3G
Personal Quote: "In case of a zombie invasion, please follow me"
Tools of the Trade: C7A2 Battle Rifle